Completed Fic of the Week 5/28-6/5

July 09, 2010
We Don't Break, We Bend by LyricalKris
Review by bbwraven
Summary: When the man who’s supposed to love them hurts them, and the people who are supposed to save them won't listen, it falls on their shoulders to not just survive, but save each other.

**Caution: This is an angst filled fiction dealing with physical, emotional and sexual abuse.**
I don't remember how I found 'We Don't Break, We Bend’ but I thank my lucky stars I did. This isn't your typical fic where Bella and Edward fall in love. It's a story of three teenagers growing up in an abusive home and despite the fact they never know when they're guardian James will explode, they still manage to create a family.

Social outcasts Jasper, Edward and Bella learned to depend on each other and everyday they survive means its one day closer to the freedom they long for. When the trio meets Alice they learn to hide both their physical and emotional wounds from her and her family.

LyricalKris managed to create a dark and real situation where you're captivated from the opening paragraph and you don't stop until you've read every chapter. Like most fics each chapter begins with song lyrics, and when Lyrical used 'Bent' by Matchbox Twenty I knew this fic owned me.
When I was a diehard Matchbox Twenty fan and like any fan the song was on repeat but I constantly thought of romantic relationships gone wrong and letting the new person you're not all there. But I saw 'Bent' in a whole new light after reading this fic, as if Kris was saying no matter how many times Jasper, Edward, and Bella were beaten, they always found a way to put themselves back together.
I simply found each character had some form of bravery and they held each other together when life was getting worst. I love when the characters in a fic come off the pages and become real in my eyes.
Jasper's head had been lolling on the couch cushion as he caught his breath from the exertion of getting his shirt off. He rolled his head in her direction, his eyes opening just enough so he could look at her. He swallowed a couple of times, licking his dry lips so he could talk. "I'm not broken, baby girl. I bend really well," he promised.
The situation Kris wrote about is a painful subject, and even though I read ‘We Don’t Break, We Bend’ months ago it still has the ability to make me cry simply because I could feel their pain, confusion or joy and sometime all three. It’s the only way I know how to explain it. Please check out this fic!
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WIP of the Week 5/28-6/3


Revelry by Teambella23
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5679414/1/
Review by writerinmydream
*This story is no longer available*
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Summary: AH,OOC, LEMONS He is always aware of where she is and what she is doing. Bella makes sure that Edward's eyes are only on her...grabbing his attention every chance she can. She is in need of constant allegiance...its fucked but works for them.

Beautifully tragic. Painfully compelling. A fanfiction that once you sit down to start you won't be able to walk away.

Revelry by TeamBella23 is a story that makes you feel and tears at your heart, leaving you exhausted and begging for more. It demands you open your eyes and heart to absorb every inch of pain and suffering, love and adoration that the central characters endure.

The relationship between Bella, Edward and Jasper is beautiful, so passionate and loving that it made me wish for friends like that of my own. But with the beauty is an ugliness you can feel after the first few chapters. What has the potential to be a loving and healing friendship for these wounded souls takes a tragic turn, shaping that future of the characters in ways they could never have expected.

Chapter 5 Jasper POV
“Edward…he is trapped by his emotion. Characters like Bella and I are supposed to be alone, dwelling and plotting our next moves. People like Edward, the good ones, are supposed to move on from this bullshit and live a long healthy normal life.
Edward lost that the moment he met and fell in love with the Belly Button.
But he turned himself in; he willingly gave up everything for her…independence and option. He is tied to her, as she is to him; I fit somewhere in the middle.
Three makes a family.
Trapped, bipolar, self harming…three.
Because they are family, I should have known better.
I could have saved him from this…after all their saving, this was my chance to save and what the fuck do I do?
Let him blow off a fucking porch rail.
And he growls…..”


This story MUST be read. The author knows just how to capture your heart and soul with this story. Be careful, it's not for the faint of heart!

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