tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3567924283588906805.post2839030715265092187..comments2021-02-16T04:25:45.962-05:00Comments on Indie Fic Pimp: WIP of the Week: 2/13/12IndieFicPimphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09572517533311998557noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3567924283588906805.post-21939871331625255052012-02-26T02:16:00.046-05:002012-02-26T02:16:00.046-05:00Thank you for this review - I just adore this stor...Thank you for this review - I just adore this story. You're right that it takes its time and offers us deeper insights into both Edward and Bella. Of course I love hearing from Edward, but what surprises me is how much I like this Bella. She is thoughtful and insightful, and unlike canon Bella is able to draw a line rather than whining. I think SM just kept repeating that Bella is smart and kind and self-sacrificing, etc., but this story actually shows us those character traits in action. Also Edward makes some wonderfully snarky observations about their high school companions - hilarious. <br /><br />If you haven't read this story, you're missing out on a thoughtfully imagined and beautifully written take on these beloved canon characters.renee aubinnoreply@blogger.com